directions 4

　　study the following table carefully and write an essay in which you should:

　　1. describe the table,

　　2. suggest possible solutions to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in china.

　　you should write 160~200 words neatly on answer sheet 2.

　　国家 大学年均匀学费 国民人均年收入 比值

　　美国 4，700美元 35，000美元 1/8

　　英国 1，500英镑 15，000英镑 1/10

　　我国 7，500元 7，500元 1

　　审题:

　　在审题的环节中，咱们应当将读图表(图像)和看提纲有机地联系起来。有的时分，提纲中会把文章的主题直接给出来，这时咱们文章的全体规划就会简略得多。在这道题的提纲中，就呈现了我国大学学费担负沉重的疑问的字样，这就是该文的主题，咱们的文章大约环绕它打开。

　　sample:

　　from the above table we can see that in america and britain the ratio of average annual tuition of universities to gross national income per capita is about 1 to 10, but astonishingly that in china is 1. that is to say, the burden of university tuition on chinese families is nearly ten times heavier than that on american or british families. as a matter of fact, most chinese families feel it difficult to afford the high tuition of their children, and some absolutely cannot afford it, which has received more and more concern from all over the country.

　　in order to solve this problem, i strongly suggest the following solutions. first and foremost, it is a must to reduce the cost of higher education. we need to cut down the staff in universities, most of whom now have a disproportionately large number of administrators. the now widespread corruption should also be eliminated in universities, such as unnecessary tours and banquets at public expense. moreover, much importance should be attached to the reform of management system of higher education. the national government should not only increase financial investment in higher education but also optimize the distribution of such money.

　　to sum up, it is high time to pay enough attention to the problem of the heavy burden of university tuition in our country, and to solve it a comprehensive educational reform is essential.

　　点评:

　　该文共分三段，第一段是描绘表格，第二段是给出处置办法，第三段是总结。

　　第一段是对表格进行描绘这时咱们不必定要把每个数据都描绘出来，而是要捉住疑问的要害。这个表格的要害就是体现我国大学学费太高，根据就是学费与国民人均年收入之比。美国与英国处于差不多的水平，所以放在一同说就可以了。该段共分三句话，第一句将比例描绘出来，第二句作出比照我国家庭担负的大学学费是英美国家的十倍之多。第三句进一步阐明我国

大有些家庭感触担负较重，有些家庭根柢就担负不起。

　　第二段提出处置办法，第一句是模板句，之后分两方面来说。第一方面说的是削减高级教育的本钱，分为两个方面，一是减员增效，二是消除糜烂。第二方面说的是高教打点体系的变革。国家应加强高级教育的出资，并合理装备这些资金。

　　最终一段是总结，说处置大学学费变成沉重担负疑问正值其时，全部变革势在必行。

　　心得:

　　提纲中假定呈现文章主题，必定要把捉住，这直接抉择了文章的谋篇规划。

　　描绘图表时不必定要8面细巧，只需捉住要点即可。

　　写缘由或处置办法的期间时条理必定要理解，一般分为三点(也有两点或四点的情况)，不必定是声威的说明，咱们并非是专门研讨该疑问的专家，阅卷教师也不会太苛求，只需契合道理即可。要害是言语表达必定要精确，假定要拿高分就必定要有出彩的当地。